Nov 8, 2012 -
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1 Comment The end of the beginning
I stare down at the face
Of the detested
Of the intolerant
Of the man who ruined
Me.
I glower at the hands
That connected with my face
That were held palm up
Halting my next words,
That now lay together,
Peaceful.
I smirk at the Virgin Mary
On the chain bore round his neck
Christianity his crutch,
Mary his fantasy –
The woman who always listened.
I stare down at the face
Of my husband.
Tears sliding down my cheeks
Not for the reasons they think.
Oh what will I do without him?
This is poem is very good because of the personality. The religion factor combined with marriage is emotional. The stanza’s are very organize emphasizing impact. I have to ask Professor Seay because I am not sure if capitalizing letters when not starting a new sentence is OK with lines. Other than that is very well written and thought out. Great Job!!
~Lisa~